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One complete, in-depth round of feedback on your draft. I find what’s unique about you, I’ll provided guided questions, ideas, and ways to make your writing stronger line by line. You will have a clear, actionable plan to revise on your own and create a stellar essay.
The Checkup tells you what’s holding your essay back. The Diagnosis shows you exactly where it happens and how to fix it.
Line-by-line comments in your Google Doc that explain why something isn’t working, not just what to change
Every comment ranked so you know what to fix first
Your full Uniqueness Read: where you show up, where you disappear, the thread I see in you, what your essay is really about, and the biggest fix
Reflection questions written for your story, to uncover the details and thoughts that belong in your essay
Notes on your opening and ending, with specific directions to try
Patterns in your writing to watch for, which helps with your supplementals too
A step-by-step revision plan, so you know exactly where to start
Spelling and grammar corrected
Please refer to the main page for the full package description. After you book, I’ll email you within 24 hours with instructions for sharing your document. Each round comes back within 7 days of receiving your draft, often sooner.
One complete, in-depth round of feedback on your draft. I find what’s unique about you, I’ll provided guided questions, ideas, and ways to make your writing stronger line by line. You will have a clear, actionable plan to revise on your own and create a stellar essay.
The Checkup tells you what’s holding your essay back. The Diagnosis shows you exactly where it happens and how to fix it.
Line-by-line comments in your Google Doc that explain why something isn’t working, not just what to change
Every comment ranked so you know what to fix first
Your full Uniqueness Read: where you show up, where you disappear, the thread I see in you, what your essay is really about, and the biggest fix
Reflection questions written for your story, to uncover the details and thoughts that belong in your essay
Notes on your opening and ending, with specific directions to try
Patterns in your writing to watch for, which helps with your supplementals too
A step-by-step revision plan, so you know exactly where to start
Spelling and grammar corrected
Please refer to the main page for the full package description. After you book, I’ll email you within 24 hours with instructions for sharing your document. Each round comes back within 7 days of receiving your draft, often sooner.